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校园安全问题越来越受到重视。作为在校学生，我们应该如何来保证自己的安全呢？请你根据提示内容，以School safety为话题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
1、 遵守校规，不迟到，不早退；未经老师允许不要出校门。
2、 不跟陌生人走；不接受陌生人的物品。
3、 上学和放学最好结伴同行，天黑前一定要到家。
4、 有麻烦一定要告知家长和老师。
参考词汇；permission n.允许。
要求：语法正确、内容连贯、书写工整。
School safety
More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays. As a student in school. First, we should obey school rules, such as, don’t be late for school; don’t get out of school without teacher’s permission. Then, we can’t follow strangers after school. And do not accept stranger’s things. We’d better go with other students on the way school or on the way home. And remember must come home before darkness. When we meet trouble, we should quickly tell teachers or parents. They might give us correct ways to solve them.
批语：
1）Kevin的整篇行文与措词符合初三学生的水平；
2）More and more people pay special attention to school safety nowadays.这一句开头提示非常好！词组pay attention to用得恰到好处。
3）a student......we......在“数”上发生逻辑错误，拟改为：Being students,we should first obey school rules
4）such as 后为名词性罗列，不可直接跟动词原形，应改为：not being late for school and not getting out of .......
5）remember must come 中的must改成to
